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Ferriswheelshipping – Sometimes



Sometimes I feel powerless.

Powerless to stop the bad things that happen, all around me, in the world, everywhere.

But then he is there, whispering words of love and assurance into my ear.

"White, you are not powerless.

"You have Pokemon, friends, and, most importantly, you have me by your side.

"You're the most able girl I know."



Sometimes I feel wary.

Wary of people, cities, the world. Sometimes I feel as if my only friends are Pokemon.

But then she is there, laughing and smiling, making me feel like the most amazing person on Earth.

"N, there's no need to be scared.

"I'm here for you, and we can face the darkness together."



Sometimes I feel betrayed.

Hurt by the man I was starting to love, knowing that he was someone entirely different than who I thought I knew.

And then it hits me -- He can't be like that.

Maybe the N I know really is down there beneath the King of Team Plasma.



Sometimes I feel alone.

Knowing that I broke the heart of the one person I trusted, the one person who understood me.

But then I know that maybe she knows the true me

And that she can clear the shadows from my heart.



Sometimes I feel as if everything has turned against me.

That there is no hope and that my world has come crashing down.

But then, I look at the other…

And we both know that as long as we have each other…

Our world is still intact.

(Note: the bold part in the end is what both of them are thinking. ;;;; )

...wow this thing is old.

I wrote it on a particularly bad day (night?) when it was 2 AM and I was exhausted (thus the crappiness) and I had FWS on the brain.

It's not that good but I thought I'd share anyway. ;;;

No critique, please, because I already think this is bad...xD

I have permission from Surf-cat, the artist, to use this picture. =) Thank you!

Touko, N and Pokemon (c) Nintendo
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:icontheshipingqueen:
TheShipingQueen Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
amasing
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SerenaHarmonia Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Student General Artist
so sweet.
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:iconshinyfeatherleader:
shinyfeatherleader Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
That was so beautiful!
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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:iconshinwa-tsuki:
Shinwa-Tsuki Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
Very nice!
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! =)
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:iconshinwa-tsuki:
Shinwa-Tsuki Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
You're welcome.
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Pok3monTrain3rBlu3 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Artist
I agree.
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the comment, but..agree with what? xD
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:iconpok3montrain3rblu3:
Pok3monTrain3rBlu3 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student Artist
With ~miran-hijiri~ about this being a nice poem.^.^
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, okay, thank you! Yeah, I don't see the comment as a reply to a different comment, so I don't know who you're replying to. ^o^
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:iconpok3montrain3rblu3:
Pok3monTrain3rBlu3 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student Artist
it's okay ^.^
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:iconcursestein:
Cursestein Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is a nice poen!
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. ^^
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:iconcursestein:
Cursestein Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! Is it a poem or is it prose?
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm no poetry expert but I'd just consider this poetry. :'o
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:iconcursestein:
Cursestein Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There are verses, so it's poetry.
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wait, so why did you ask then? =P
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:iconcursestein:
Cursestein Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Because I kinda thought it was at first. =p
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:iconcursestein:
Cursestein Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I mean poem.
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jade9191998 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
I. EFFIN. cried.
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hope you didn't cry TOO hard. <33 But thank you so much.
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:iconjade9191998:
jade9191998 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
your welcome
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:iconlancetheknight:
lancetheknight Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
Homigod.... This is amazing Awesome jobbb! :la: :heart:
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my, thank you! :heart:
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:iconlancetheknight:
lancetheknight Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
You're welcome :D
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:iconkaekaae:
KaeKaae Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i like this. its cute c:
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! ^.^
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:iconmegafan123100:
megafan123100 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Student Artist
Wow nice says a lot
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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:iconrachettarose:
Rachettarose Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011
Very deep and beautiful
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. ;o;
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:iconhetaliagirl98:
HetaliaGirl98 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that is amazing ! I love it ^^
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, thank you so much! :love: For the fave as well!
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:iconhetaliagirl98:
HetaliaGirl98 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're very welcome ^^
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TyphonDrone Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
Omigawsh, that's amazing actually. I write Poetry and things, and I think that it's beautiful. <3 *fav*
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Really? Wow, thank you so much! :iconiloveyouplz:
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ShortieLuvsAnime Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011
i like the pic! :D
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thanks, I wish it was mine. xD
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:iconkiya1:
Kiya1 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
it looks like somthing out of a fanfic i love it its rly cute ^^
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :love:
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:iconwhitepearlvoice:
WhitePearlVoice Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Student General Artist
HOLY. That is awesome
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :huggle:
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WhitePearlVoice Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Student General Artist
I see the system is letting you say Thank you now ;) Haha np
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
xD The system has forgiven me~
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:iconwhitepearlvoice:
WhitePearlVoice Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Student General Artist
lmao
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:iconh3artstar:
h3artstar Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Its beautiful :heart: lovely
I like it :)
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:iconvera-san:
vera-san Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. >.<
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:iconh3artstar:
h3artstar Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
you are welcome :3
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Dragunlord13 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
:la: This is nice!
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